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2nd flash, please be gentle. Just a devil and an angel fighting over a soul.
it just needs to be longer
for your second flash this is pretty good, i love the idea of the flash so 10 stars.
i went soo gentle too. lol i think you know what to do now.
Thank you :3
For your Second flash that was really well done. I would make it longer for sure.
Try and introduce your characters in the plot give them... well... character. For example, let's take the guy who jumps of of the cliff make him stand there a little longer let the audience get a little familiarized with him. I like how the timing of the first bass drum in your clip of "O Fortuna" matched perfectly with the guy slamming into the ground, with that in mind try and make the music fit with whatever you're doing. I think making this a little longer would've helped that.
Never the less, I enjoyed it.
Thank you for the insight.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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