Score: 10

"Oh my word, I loved it."

by: DarkSweetz

date: September 28, 2009

It explained everything about my boyfriend and I, thank you so much for making/uploading this. It means a lot. Keep up the good work! ^-^ - Joy

Score: 2

"Hmph."

by: Crink

date: April 14, 2009

That was about as lame as those amv's on youtube.

Score: 10

"That Was Beautiful"

by: RocketMan08

date: April 12, 2009

Keep up the good work considering this was made in only 1 day!

Score: 2

"Ugh..."

by: ThePeasant

date: January 30, 2009

I didn't like the 'poem' because it wasn't a poem at all... It was both freeform and lacked imagery. This was more like a personal letter than a poem.

Poetry needs, firstly, to paint a picture with words and touch hidden layers of the subconscious. It secondly needs to mirror the message with the meter. Rhythm and rhyme aren't arbitrary - when used properly they set the tone for your poetry and push the depth of your message further.

If you want to write poetry instead of floury prose, you need to learn how.

Score: 8

"Good Job"

by: Bruceki

date: January 29, 2009

I liked the script and I thought the background animation was a nice touch. I also like your choice of music. These types of flashes aren't my cup of tea but I enjoyed this one.