Water Gun by PJTrinidad



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Submitted: 01/29/2009 | 10:41AM EST

File Info: Movie | 2 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Comedy - Original

Current Score: 3.53 / 5.00

297 votes | 1,126 views

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Author Comments

Haven't submitted anything for a while. Did this in about 3 days.

All animation and voices done by me (P.J Trinidad).

Thanks to Flashkit for some sound effects.

Caution: some flashy scenes, may be harmful if you have epilepsy or something.

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Average Score: 8.1 / 10

Score: 7
zimzap

"Very good story and plot. Humorous and unexpected!"

by: zimzap
date: January 30, 2009

The voice acting stood out as very strong and maintained a tone that kept the plot twist hidden well. Very, very funny and my only advice would be that you should increase the length of your submissions and develop the plot better; however, the short, lack of animation from the first scene served as an excellent juxtaposition for the ending violence.

All in all, an above average submission and your voice talents makes me hopeful that you will produce more going forward!

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Score: 8
XRocko

"HEADSHOT!!! :D"

by: XRocko
date: January 29, 2009

hah :D
loved it :),..
but have to agree with,. TheManWhoLaughs.. review,.
needs menu,. replay optins, and background noise to take away from the moments your mic goes on to speak :)
but on the plus,.. it was very funny :)

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Score: 10
Ludamage

"HEADSHOT!!!"

date: January 29, 2009

IT WAS REALLY AWESOME!!!
NEVAR FORGET IT!!!! ^_^

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Score: 8
TheManWhoLaughs

""Haha, headshot!""

date: January 29, 2009

Pretty good shit. The only thing I'm mostly seeing needing in this cartoon is well menu or replay buttons, cause I'm not a fan of the looping. But aside from that is the white noise that can be heard every time you have the mike on, which sounds weird against the total silence heard otherwise.

January 29, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah I was in a bit of a rush to complete the movie. Thanks.

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Score: 9
Mattster

"Haha Awesome"

date: January 29, 2009

That was pretty funny. The animation was descent, sound quality was awesome, humor was awesome.

Very good work, my suggestion for next time is to not stretch the NG Tank loader, it makes it look sloppy :P

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