meh!
it was good-ish. Work on the animation some and work on collisions make sure they only go through what they're supposed to
Author Comments
Ok, so this is my very first piece of flash material to make. I made it in a few hours, including the time I searched for materials. I just want to point out I'm still a beginner, so I still have a long way to go in learning flash, so please do not post any ridiculous comments.
However, I really appreciate any feedback and rates given, so if you would be so kind, please do. So thank you, and enjoy.
Okay Attempt at a first flash
It was an okay attempt at a first flash. There were a few collision problems, and animation was a bit choppy. Though there was really no plot. And Mario went completely through the pow block. Sound and music was alright, But could use some fixing. Overall, an average flash.
Well...
I guess it was ok for a first flash. Although it lacked any real plot. Also when Toad exited the first screen, you could still see him on the side till the scene changed. Also at the one point the characters were actually standing inside the floors instead of on them. Anyway keep practicing.
not to bad
For a flirst flash its not bad
Sound was alright
I noticed some minor collision problams
After toad left the pipe and stood there he was inside the blocks
Mario complatly bypassed the POW Block
It looked alright Sprite's didnt move that well but hell its your first flash
Overall Avrage
Not to shabby :3
3/10
The animation was glitchy and there was really no plot, keep working.