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Good animation...

Good animation and you used Zelda's sounds for that i understand the almost perfect rating evryone gave you, but I tough it would be funnier... the only thing that made me laugh was in the house with the jar and the woman. But other than that, it was pretty deceiving. 7/10 because of really good animation.

Superb art. Jokes are stale.

I remember liking the first two a lot but when I watched this one the animation is good but the humor just wasnt there. Jokes went too slow.

Nice visuals only partly make up for sub-par jokes

It just wasn't funny. The pacing was all wrong, with too many frequent pauses. I'm not saying you should be like egoraptor, throwing the jokes out every second, but you need to speed it up between transitions of scenes.

Also, the Navi voice actor isn't that great - every line sounded too sarcastic all the time. The animation is not the best, but it's damn good - the anime moments kinda ruin it for me as I don't find anime funny at all.

I was hoping to see an improvement over last time, but the same problems remain. With the overwhelmingly popular response, it's likely this review won't change anything, but I'd suggest finding a professional writer (or someone with a bit more experience) to write the dialogue, and then you could tweak the pacing yourself - the animation is already at a good level.

I'm not going to be blinded by the Zelda name on the front - it was an average flash in terms of story, pacing and laughs. Not bad, but not awesome, either. Better luck next time.

What's with the random quality change?

All the sudden the voices got a lot more crisper.
It's not a bad thing that the voices were better sound quality, but why the sudden change? If nothing be consistent, it really dragged me out of the story.
While the art was top notch, I couldn't help but feeling that some of the animations dragged a bit and it felt a bit awkward.
The timing is all off. I read the punchline in the subtitles before the guyh finished saying his line.
The script... well it's a mix. Good bits, bad bits. Parts that needed to omitted entirely..
Music selection was good though.

Overall, you got all points for effort, but it really seemed unpolished.

The writing ruined it for me.

Look, I really liked the graphics and animation, they're great.

But it's astonishing how you could spend so much time animating such a poorly-written script (it REALLY detracted from the quality of the cartoon). The jokes were too unfunny, most of them are either predictable or have really bad timing. My advice is that, for your next work, you try spending a lot of time in the script and make a shorter animation, paying special attention to timing and dialogue (or just get someone else to do the script while you focus on drawing/animating, which is your strong point).

The voice acting was also pretty bad. Navi's lines (and, to be honest, everyone else's) were very poorly delivered and the sound quality was really bad - although that's understandable, since the filesize is already too big and you probably needed to compress it or something, idk.

To sum it up, congratulations to Granfaloon on the art and animation, the rest really really needs some work.