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This is my first submission to NG. I just tried something out. I know it's real short. But I just wanted to submit something to NG and see how it came out (settings etc.)
This is A short about a penguin and a Polar Bear. Enjoy !
Please submit your reviews and vote. So that I can improve myself and make more of these.
* Update : Playbutton added
That's all I gotta say.
thats so adorable
that was scary lol
the next time try to put some action 2 :P
For a first submission, its a good start. I think there is a lot of potential there. Keep working on it cause with some more time and practice, you could come up with something really amazing! I did like the dead bear, but tell a story with it next time. Right now we are left with an assumption that the penguin killed the bear, but it would be great if you could give us more of a background so that we can follow the story with the characters themselves. Just something to think about.
Yes thank you. I will keep that in mind for my next bigger animation ;). Thanks for reviewing
Seriously, a loop?
I mean, decent animation, good vocals or at least you've found a place with good sounds to it. But dude, you gotta put more than five minutes into this if you want any more stars.
I'm giving you one star for not spamming.
Yeah I didn't know how to put the preloader in my animation, after i finished it. I didn't do it, because I didn't expect to put this on NG. So I tried it afterwards but I didn't figure it out :P. Thanks for your review
A short film about a park bench
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