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Jan 27, 2009 | 8:34 AM EST

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Okay hi guys >.

I just got to know about Flash recently and really liked it. But my skills still sucked >.>. I don't know anything about those complicated Flash scripts thinggie >.>. But I hope that by submitting my works here and being around, you guys would help me improve my skills >.

About this submission... It's a story about a demon and an angel. The demon had done some bad things and had to become a demon, a hated and ignored being. He became cold, emotionless, his heart stopped beating. All he needs is a little light, so he waited and waited, until one day... Watch to find out xD.

Sorry the voice quality is bad. My stupid headphone is so useless >.>. Both voices were done by me xD. Sorry if my voice gives you goosebumps, it did give me goosebumps you know >.>. And sorry for my weird accent; I'm Asian and English isn't my first language ^^;;.

Okay I think it's enough babbling... So, happy Lunar New Year to all my Asian pals! Xin nian kuai le! xDDD Hope you guys enjoy a first submission of a newbie in both flash and NG!

EDIT: Okay so the replay button doesn't work >"

Reviews


Prid-OutingPrid-Outing

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 27, 2009

WOW!

For your first submission here at NG, this is incredibly AWESOME. The story is sad at the beginning but at the end it's happy. You are a different person. You dont like to make funny animation, but meaningfull. This story made almost CRY!

5 from me!


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Linhtan responds:

Waaah you really think so? xD You make me sooooo happy T^T. Thanks for the compliment <3333.


triathalonofplanetstriathalonofplanets

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 27, 2009

My whole reveiw:

Graphics: 9/10
Amazing graphic for a first-timer on NG. I felt like you were familiar with Flash.
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Story: 8/10
The whole "emo" thing seems overdone, but you did take a somewhat new take on it. Kudos.
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Voice: 7/10
Hint: If you do voicings again, get a better mic, or don't speak so directly into it. It was very static-y and often faded in and out.
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Re-watch value: Medium
Many of the "emo" stories are the same, and very few of them can bring it to a whole new level. You are almost there, but not yet. Work a little more on the graphics to bring it to pro-level. You have talent, but you must make the raw material into gold.
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Overall: 8/10
It's a good flash, and I wouldn't be surprised if it makes the Daily Features. Just work on your graphics and get a better mic.
Otherwise, amazing job!

P.S. There are many flash tutorials on NG, look for em. Many of them are really helpful.


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Linhtan responds:

Waaah thank you so much for the long and helpful review <3. I've been playing around with Flash for a while but nothing really came out until this xD. Thanks a lot , I'll try harder next time :D


OBecOBec

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 27, 2009

AWESOME~!

It looks damn good for your first submission.
Even though it isn't so cool on the graphics and the voices don't sound too well it just looks good and sends the message around ^_^.
If you just aren't good with english voices just use your maternal language and subtitle it :)

p.s. the music fits perfectly.

I give this 8 stars, 5/5 and hope that you will strive for perfection.

Hope to see more stuff from you ^_^

p.p.s: the angel's voice sounded good :P


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Linhtan responds:

Thanks for the nice comment and advice <3. I'll try my best on the next submissions <3.


BoomzeroBoomzero

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 27, 2009

Nice

So this was your first submission i read..
Wow, i'm impressed to see a first-submitted movie being this good.

The voice-acting wasn't that bad actually =O
Keep it up, i hope to see more of you ^^



tofwaptofwap

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 27, 2009

WELL I SEE

well you got docked on the voices becuase they are so hard to hear without turning up the volume, the animation was fair not that there was much movement involved it would have been simple to move the graphics about, not much of a story line unless this was an introduction to your sieries and it is able to break off into that you left that open if you started with this and made a flash back.

but we need those vocals up if you continue into a series so work on that

enjoy newgrounds everyone


Linhtan responds:

Thanks for the first comment <3. The microphone was useless I see >.>. Maybe I should just remove my voice :(. Thank you anyway, I'll try my best to improve :D :D :D