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this is part of a series of shorts i did, it was made in one day, so don't be too harsh.
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I'll have to check out the rest to get the general context but very well animated. Unfairly scored considering things that have made front page recently but meh, what can you do lol. Nice work.
haha, thanks heaps man, i haven't posted any of the others yet though.
Spend more time...
And we'll be less harsh. The animation was alright; could have been longer. The sounds did their job I suppose, but nothing really commendable.
well, i guess i shoulda put this in the author comments, but the kinda thing was that i had to do a short a day for 10 days, so the lapses in quality are probs due to that. thanks for the review tho
Short yet Cool
As a short it was excellent. I just would've hoped for the action to be more on screen. Either way, it's impressive for a day's work.
i'll take that into account next time, thanks for the review!
You have great potential.
To begin with, make it longer. Great flashes usually aren't made in a day.
Otherwise, the graphics were cool, but you need music. Too many good flashes just don't have music.
Hope you make it into the portal, good sir. You certainly have the potential for it.
thanks man, i couldn't find any music fitting, but i'll make some next time. thanks for the review and constructive. :)
A short film about a park bench
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