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Short flash i worked on in navigator(an extra class i have in school) nothing specail but i tried!
bad animation( basically none), bad sound( couldn't understand them at all.)
It was kind of funny. But the audio/video didn't sync up. At all. And the illustration was terrible. 5/10 for an okay joke.
Short, kind of unfunny.
I felt like a little more effort could have been put into this. Not so much for the artistry or style, just for a better, more thought-out concept to the flash. Although I do have to give you credit on the cow's spots. I wonder how many people will notice it's a map of the world. I give you some points for creativity there.
But overall, try and lengthen it out, and add-on to what the farmer does. You know, maybe add in what else farmers do on the farm, with a comedic twist to it. Regardless, I think it has a lot of room for improvement.
Maybe you should work a little harder...
Before submitting anything to the portal. I can tell you're trying but sorry no cigar.
1. the voices are horrid. I don't know what computer voice modulator you used but it's very bad.
2. the art isn't too good either. normally that isn't a problem but if the writing can't compensate it can't work.
3. About the writing, it's not original and I'm sorry but it's just not funny.
4. If the flash is this low quality it shouldn't drag on.
5. Ican't understand what that goat says.
Please takes some time before submitting something.
if you couldn't even understand the goat, i dont see how you can even remotely rate a flash, wether it be good or bad
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