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Submitted: 01/21/2009 | 03:21PM EST

File Info: Movie | 1.2 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Comedy - Original

Current Score: 1.71 / 5.00

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Author Comments

This is pretty much my first flash animation. One of my friends (named in credits) helped me with the more complicated parts of animating and helped me think of the idea. (BTW In the credits: Retard_incarnate is my username for other sites and for all of my pivot animations) Anyway...

It's a story about one misunderstood man that...oh who am i kidding. There's a guy. He makes stuff go boom. He's cool. World blows up. The End.

Please leave constructive criticism so i can improve my future flashes. Thanks for watching!

UPDATE: Hey guys, i've started work on my second flash, and i used alot of the feedback from this one to help it out. The first thing i did is got a nice looking font, for example. Anyway, i am amazed at my own skills so far, and you'll see what i mean once i finish it. I'm putting alot more time and effort into this next one, and i'm expecting it to be finished around mid febuary to the begining of march (yes, really!). Its title is The Ultimate Ownage 2, incase you didn't guess.

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Average Score: 5.4 / 10

Score: 6
kiulug

"funny, not bad"

by: kiulug
date: January 22, 2009

Good for a first attempt, and a hell of alot better than i've ever done in the history of ever. Funny, at some points, reminded me of demented cartoon movie. The text could have been up for longer cuz i missed half of it.

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Score: 4
stickflyer

"Hmm."

date: January 21, 2009

It was OK, for your first flash. Im giving you a 4 because the stick figure stayed in the same position pretty much the whole time and You used Text for the Whole thing, Just about. Keep trying! 4 out of 10, 2 out of 5.

January 21, 2009

Author's Response:

lol, ill be sure to have an actual moving person in my next flash! thanks for the tip!

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Score: 6
Jesuslizard

"Not bad."

date: January 21, 2009

Very nicely done for your first flash atempt.
Smooth tweening and nice sound quality.
Mind telling what the intro song is called?

January 21, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks for the compliment, the song is called Hell above the water. the intro is the only really good part in the song tho, the words are kinds boring! XD

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Score: 10
PlasticFisherMen

"Great!"

date: January 21, 2009

This is great for your first flash, keep them coming!

January 21, 2009

Author's Response:

thank you for the compliment! i was hoping for suggestions to improve but encouragment is good too :)

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Score: 4
fucian

"boring"

by: fucian
date: January 21, 2009

I congratulate you on trying and I think every flash submitted should at least include some effort however... I was board and lost interest id say halfway through. The text was OK but sooo boring I think you should add some pics in the background or possibly some type of other visual effect instead of the construction paper look.

January 21, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks for the tips, the text was supposed to be annoyingly funny, but it does get boring i admit, in future animations ill be sure to have less/better text.

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