Score: 10

"pretty neat!"

by: DeathJuice3

date: December 4, 2009

This is pretty neat! but like brownspider said the enemy doesnt really attack but reading the spells and watching the animations were pretty cool :) so ill give you a 10 and a 5 this being ur first flash :) good job!

Score: 8

"Kinda boring"

by: brownspider

date: January 21, 2009

I thought this was an interesting concept on the whole, and a unique idea indeed. I did think it got a bit tedious though to read all the spell descriptions, especially since they didn't serve a purpose (although the animations were kind of funny). On the last page of each chapter, the Guardian Deity's picture tends to overlap the text. Watch out for this, as it decreases legibility.

I was expecting an actual test (questionnaire) subsequent to reading the book, and I was somewhat disappointed to see that there was not one. The fight is cool at first, until you realize that the enemy does not fight back. This part should be a standalone Flash game.

I thought this was neat, and very nicely done for your first-ever online Flash, but it is really just turning pages in a book, which does turn off people with short attention spans, i.e. most of the people who will probably view this.

Score: 0

"Boring"

by: awsome1

date: January 21, 2009

No offense but all it was is reading a book, andi don't like reading

Score: 8

"Prettu intrensting"

by: Zeliek

date: January 21, 2009

I would say for a solo first project it is very good

Score: 0

"i'm sorry"

by: vampirehunterme

date: January 21, 2009

but i just dont get this. i mean, if it had maybe gone more into detail about the actual beliefs in magic and the like than i could see it as informative. or if you learned then used the spells in some kinda adventure then that woulda been cool too. but as it stands, all it is, in a nutshell, is reading and turning a page.as such i have to give u 3 stars and a zero. but for a first time flash you show alot of promise. good luck on future projects.