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This is a Part 1/Intro, so it will not be as long as my more-to-come ones. This one is only 30 seconds. My other ones will be about 3 minutes or 4.
You always say...
That you're going to make your future submissions longer, but you never do, it's just an excuse to have FLASH written next to your name on your userpage or perhaps you were bored. innit?
Spend some more time, credit the SPRITE ARTISTS!, flow the animation well with sounds. And man, it was as choppy as fuck, get some practice or look at some tutorials first.
But this was a little improvement from your last flashes, but please don't make more for the time being. Your shitting this stuff out daily.
mesa not sure...
im not that negative, i liked the sprites but the animation movement was a bit rusty
i dont mind it, we all get better and i know lol :)
Notbad could be improved
nice characters and good fast animation here, i like your eye for detail on these, i would have text at the bottom instead of over the guys head but thats just my opinion, anyways nice job
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better font for text and place it at the bottom of the screen like subtitles
Decent and good detail in this one
I give you a four.
I thought it was too short, they ran digitaly, and it was hardly any violence compared to the original madness. I loved the idea, just be a more like the original.
It was good attempt but you need to practice more. You also need better use of motion tweens if that was what you were really using. I suggest you experiment with flash a little while to get the flash to look decent. 3/5 5/10
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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