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Here is my first animation. Nothing pretty or lengthy. Just wanted some feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how to improve.
The flash took me two and a half days. This flash was in fact a short dream of mine, not too sure what it means...
This was Awesome!!! There is nothing else for me to say but the fact this was total awesomeness!
No need for critisism...
Because this film is awesome. It's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work.
Is this *really* your first animation?
It's great! Not a lot I can suggest, other than maybe have some sound effects on the next one, but it works okay with just the music. Otherwise that's a very impressive start.
I don't know much about flash but
This looks good. The animation seemed good and the art was alright. Wish I could give something more helpful sorry. Was a bit odd but since it was based on a dream I guess thats par for the course.
My only complaint is that the art could use a bit of improvement (the shuttering/inconsistency, that is. I like your style).
Besides that, this is nicely done.
A short film about a park bench
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