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Jan 19, 2009 | 1:30 AM EST

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Here is my first animation. Nothing pretty or lengthy. Just wanted some feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how to improve.

The flash took me two and a half days. This flash was in fact a short dream of mine, not too sure what it means...



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Totally Awesome!!!

This was Awesome!!! There is nothing else for me to say but the fact this was total awesomeness!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

No need for critisism...

Because this film is awesome. It's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Is this *really* your first animation?

It's great! Not a lot I can suggest, other than maybe have some sound effects on the next one, but it works okay with just the music. Otherwise that's a very impressive start.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I don't know much about flash but

This looks good. The animation seemed good and the art was alright. Wish I could give something more helpful sorry. Was a bit odd but since it was based on a dream I guess thats par for the course.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nicely done

My only complaint is that the art could use a bit of improvement (the shuttering/inconsistency, that is. I like your style).
Besides that, this is nicely done.