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Jan 19, 2009 | 1:30 AM EST

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Author Comments

Here is my first animation. Nothing pretty or lengthy. Just wanted some feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how to improve.

The flash took me two and a half days. This flash was in fact a short dream of mine, not too sure what it means...



Rated 5 / 5 stars

No need for critisism...

Because this film is awesome. It's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nicely done

My only complaint is that the art could use a bit of improvement (the shuttering/inconsistency, that is. I like your style).
Besides that, this is nicely done.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Totally Awesome!!!

This was Awesome!!! There is nothing else for me to say but the fact this was total awesomeness!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


For a first movie that was pretty damn good. You almost got a perfect score from me but the only reason i didnt give you a ten was cuz at the beginning the movements were a lil shaky. Still great flash and let's see more from you in the future.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good one!

Very, VERY good for a first flash. Not many first flash videos contain music, sound effects and such a quality. Well done!