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Here is my first animation. Nothing pretty or lengthy. Just wanted some feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how to improve.
The flash took me two and a half days. This flash was in fact a short dream of mine, not too sure what it means...
No need for critisism...
Because this film is awesome. It's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work.
My only complaint is that the art could use a bit of improvement (the shuttering/inconsistency, that is. I like your style).
Besides that, this is nicely done.
This was Awesome!!! There is nothing else for me to say but the fact this was total awesomeness!
For a first movie that was pretty damn good. You almost got a perfect score from me but the only reason i didnt give you a ten was cuz at the beginning the movements were a lil shaky. Still great flash and let's see more from you in the future.
Very, VERY good for a first flash. Not many first flash videos contain music, sound effects and such a quality. Well done!
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