Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
one of my animations i made a long time ago but ive improved
Not as good as Scissor vs. Tyanitar
But this is an earlier submission and I don't understand why this is rated so poorly, and just on the basic fact that music played after it was over? I don't see anything so incredibly disastrous about that, but at points it seemed like there was too long of a break in the action. I'm a fan of your work and sprite animation in general. Keep it up!
Good, but not great...
Honestly, I kinda wished you would end it with a cliffhanger, like "to be continued" or something, instead of just going back to the main menu. Honestly, I thought my computer just didn't read it right at first. Secondly, and I know you're probably sick of hearing this, but dude, the music thing is crucial. it's an annoyance that most people don't take lightly (i.e., Psymecoleesis, SFaPiL and myself). However, the flash itself is far from suck. The animation was very smooth, fight scene was cool, and the sprites didn't really seem like sprites at all. Hopefully part 2 will have these problems fixed and will be epic. Until then, 4/5, 7/10.
you got some of the facial exspresions down on both of them something you hardly see in most flashes, like to see more soon. just do some fine tuning and they be epic
I must say that this is impressive for some work even if was just first time thing, keep it up!
Oh yeah, people who are like: Oh yeah this animation sucks! Have you ever tried doing you own animation? How about people crapping all over work? Cut this guy some slack.
I expected something bad, but it wasn't really. The fighting scene was not bad and the choice in the moves wasn't bad either. Only shame was that it ended WAY too quickly.
I must also agree with Psymecoleesis about the music continuing to play after the flash has ended. Apart from seeming unrefined it also increases the amount of MBs to download, therefore wasting my time!
Just fix those two things and you'd be alright.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.