Score: 5
"meh. not bad, but not good either"
date: January 19, 2009
first off, perhaps a bit of a better storyline...there's not much of one. second work on your spelling. you spell like a 10 year old retarded kid. putting new sound effects other then just music might be good, also, maybe a little viewer interaction. for instance, during the battle against the magicarp, you could have let us choose the option, and had funny endings that didn't go anywhere until you clicked the right one. it adds humor, and lets us know you actually made it to entertain us, not just to post something and pretend you're cool. just some suggestions to make it better. also work on the graphics, so it doesn't look like you drew half the set, maybe use real backdrops from the game. i am sure you can find some, or at least get some screen shots from websites, and edit out anything you don't want....
