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Hey Guys.. This is my first flash project i did for school. My teacher liked it! You may recognize the story caracters and such are similar to the 'Bad Inventions' flash movies here on Newgrounds . Well thanks for watching :)
I gotta admit.
The intro annoyed the hell outta me. Especially the text. It's decent for a first flash though!
YEAH....ummm.....art style is...noobish....destroying your computer to get rid of a flash is....beyond...noobish....Overall....
skill up your flash skill before submitting a flash on destroying flash...Keep at it....
It was ok.
For your first this is good. There was a story sort of and I liked the Looney Tunes bit at the start was cool.
The sounds effects were not too nice. The typing at the start was irritating and slow. The music in the main animation was quiet and the animating was a bit jolty.
Don't let me put you down or whatever. Keep on animating! :)
Thanks for the positive review! I appreciate it and for my next movie i will try to fix my sound and music issues. I will also take more time and fine tune my animating..
The general idea of the movie was a bit humorous, but the execution and animation of it was lacking. The one thing that really bugged me, however, was the text during the intro. It would be nice if you sped up the rate at which the text appears.
After being exiled, the mysterious "Valdoros" must contend with home invaders
Tape One of a pixel animated Horror anthology series.
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