Score: 7
"Good job."
date: February 9, 2009
Animation/Graphics - A little sloppy and it's really the only place that I took out any score from your flash, but I almost like the sloppy style. It gives it a nice touch in my opinion. Could just be me on that though. :p Anyway, I like that the words were written out instead of typed. I do think that things like the house, apple, and the stickmen could have been done a bit better. Other than that it was an interesting style.
Story/Content - Hmm, a very original idea. You could build many episodes off of this simple concept of Word Jumping. Who knows, perhaps this will be a very popular series some day. I'd keep coming up with sequels if I was you. So yeah, mega bonus points for coming up with a great original idea with stick figures. I know that can be hard to do.
Audio - Nice background music that you used, but I do think that sound effects could have helped the flash a little better. Stuff like, "Ugghhh" when the stickmen got hit or crashing noises when words were being broken or when they were falling. I don't think you should add voices though as that would obviously defeat the whole purpose of the flash.
Overall - Work on your artwork and animation just a little bit and you could make some popular flashes.
~ Review Request Club ~
February 9, 2009
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thanks for your review
It was the helpfullest so far :D
I'll appricieate your review.
and im working on more sequels!
