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this is a commercial in the post apocalyptic future
i made this with my class mates for school
i did the animations
plz give honest and fair feedback
Drawing was a bit simple but animation was very well done, the small jokes that you had interspersed throughout were good, the over 900 thing was especially well done because you effectively got the joke across without resorting to using the voiceclip which is sooooo overused. As a class project, I imagine it will get a very nice grade, but respond back to this comment after you get the grade to let me know, keep up the good work dude.
i got 100% on it, yay! :D
thanks for the feedback
Only thing that could have been better was instead of putting in text put in voice for that. Its kinda plain when you switch to animation to the white background and black text.
Improve your animation and this could be great
That certainly was interesting. Nice Vortigaunt thing too.
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