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In school, I was given a free option on what to do for a final project that was due before my school marking period ended. So I decided to do some tracing.
This is the result.
My first flash project, no preloader, but credits at the end.
And be sure to follow the prompt arrows you see a bit into the flash.
I wish I could trace the backgrounds, but I had limited time, so I had to leave them as they are.
EDIT: I added a few things, such as another 'enemy', so be sure to check it out again if you wish.
This was interesting
Well this was interesting i like your "CHARCTER" work the animation could be abit smoother though, but i did find this entertaining,
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let it roll smooth like a movie and dont use the buttons
Funny and entertaining
Needs more depth
Okay, so it's a decent start - you've got the art of tracing down nicely, but people do appreciate it when it is your own drawing, rather than something you've roughly copied off someone else.
With regards to the music file that you used, I'd suggest that you make a spot on the information for it - a direct link would be best, but without that, just a credit for it would be good news for the artist who wrote the track.
Finally, you could do with making some sort of plotline, rather than just a few random gags that are funny on their own. If you can tie them together with some conversations between the characters, they become funnier, if you see what I mean.
Still, it's a good start.
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I'll admit, I'm no real artist, and making my own things would probably take a while.
As for the music, I got it off a YTMND (the site itself was also along the lines of an 8-bit halo thing), but wasn't sure of the exact source.
And for plot, I probably would've wished for there to be voices, similar to those that I hear a lot from Xbox live.
Thanks for watching.
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This was kind of short and the music got annoying but it was pretty good for a first Flash. You should add a preloader and maybe make the animation a little smoother for next time. The graphics were pretty good though. Overall, good for a first Flash, but could be improved.
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Hm, with all the beeps and blips, I can see how it got annoying now.
Thanks for watching and reviewing though.
The drawings of the spartans were very nice I thought; however, next time:
- Make the figures move more i.e. don't make them slide along the floor but make them walk and don't make his legs suddenly disappear and appear in the car, make it a fluent movement.
- I'm not particularly keen on the background picture, I'd prefer a drawn background and floor.
- Make it longer give it a concept.
Okay so hopefully you'll take my advice on board and keep up the nice drawing.
Only, here's hoping I can get flash on my own computer so I can actually work on it some. Bleh...
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