Score: 5
"Needs more depth"
date: January 27, 2009
Okay, so it's a decent start - you've got the art of tracing down nicely, but people do appreciate it when it is your own drawing, rather than something you've roughly copied off someone else.
With regards to the music file that you used, I'd suggest that you make a spot on the information for it - a direct link would be best, but without that, just a credit for it would be good news for the artist who wrote the track.
Finally, you could do with making some sort of plotline, rather than just a few random gags that are funny on their own. If you can tie them together with some conversations between the characters, they become funnier, if you see what I mean.
Still, it's a good start.
[Review Request Club]
January 27, 2009
Author's Response:
I'll admit, I'm no real artist, and making my own things would probably take a while.
As for the music, I got it off a YTMND (the site itself was also along the lines of an 8-bit halo thing), but wasn't sure of the exact source.
And for plot, I probably would've wished for there to be voices, similar to those that I hear a lot from Xbox live.
Thanks for watching.
