Score: 5
"Not too good, but not bad either"
date: January 19, 2009
I wouldn´t really call this a great animation or anything, but it´s not the worse thing I´ve seen and I think you are on your way on becoming a fine flash author.
The drawings in this movie were okay in my opinion. Some stuff looked pretty good actually, like the shotgun and the caution sign (although I am not sure whether that´s a drawing or a picture). You seem to be fairly good at animating too. You do still need some more practice though and I would mainly focus on drawing if I were you.
As for the sounds and music: There wasn´t much to hear in this which was too bad. I thought the tune in the beginning sounded nice actually. And I think you really should add more sounds, because I think the humor in this movie didn´t came over very well because of the absence of sounds. Having some tunes play at the background is always nice too.
Other than that I don´t have much to add, except that the scenes were just random and had no connection with eachother which was bit weird. But I see this was just a test movie, so it´s okay. It´s good that you submitted this actually, to see the reviews and such.
Overall 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. I´d say just keep practicing a lot and you might produce some good movies someday. Keep it up.
~Auz
January 19, 2009
Author's Response:
Thank you very very much! :) I've noticed that sound is very important in any movie, especially in horror films, the dramatic sounds and everything. A while ago I made a sad flash short. The music was very sad and fitted the flash perfectly. I got a fairly good score on that even though the animation was terrible. I really should have put more work into this, and added background music. Thanks for reviewing, and my next animation will be much better.
