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Hai, added the stuff you guys said you wanted in the reviews for the first one. :D. Enjoy. Also, this really needs to be played in a pop up. =P Arrows to go to next frame, thats about all the instructions. ;P
Nothing too interesting.
Animation/Graphics - You had a lot of different colors and everything, but perhaps adding some other things like pictures of things and have them warp/stretch/etc... as you move the mouse certain ways. It was laggy on my computer, but if I turned it down to low quality and it was then perfectly fine. Overall the layout could have been just a little bit better quality.
Story/Content - Um... why? Ha, it really isn't too exciting to do or anything like that. Perhaps if it was a game like you had to get certain colors into certain areas like that then it wouldn't be too bad, but it really has no point. It's rather boring and isn't really too interesting to watch.
Audio - A decent choice for audio. Perhaps in the future you could make it so you could select from a menu what audio you wanted to listen to.
Overall - I just can't see a purpose to this flash. Isn't really entertaining or anything of the such. Perhaps just a good practice of the actionscript skills.
OK, some good ideas there, ty for the review ;P!
make squares for the arrow buttons, chose music, more objects, more wallpapers...but, oh well...its good!
Good ideas, ty for the review. :)
this is like... it's all making sense now! :D
but i can think of another step of eyecandy-quality.
like... not using the gradient tool.
What!?!?!?! This isn't eyecandy enough for you?!?!?!?! *sigh*. :P TY for the review. :D
Great job now its finally better! I have only 1 tip. Make an option so you can choose music. Put more music in.
OK. I will add that now. :D
EDIT: Actually, no song can ever be as perfect as the one it has now... XD
its alright but you need to add some kind of challenge to it like maybe have to separate the different colors to move on or something
Good idea, thanks for the review. :)
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