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Jan 15, 2009 | 2:24 PM EST
  • Daily 3rd Place January 16, 2009

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I finally ended my last flash movie. The Last Fight. I must say this was an enourmous work . It took me an year to finish, but i could have done this in 5 months. why? well you know...job, study,...same stuff, but most important this was done 100% in paper, all you are watching was done in a sheet of paper
(again) with nothing more than a pencil, and had to scan every ingle frame of this animation. Of course there's the edition part, wich is digital ( colouring, etc. )

So, back to the important stuff....

I hope you like this movie as much as I enjoyed making it.!!!

EDIT: woah third place! Im more than satisfied with this reward! :)

One thing I hated are the destructive comments Ive recived lately. like "go kill yourself", "go die"," or "fuckface"...whatever. I didn't know a flash movie could make someone insult me like that.

I want to tell you I read every single comment and learn from every single one. Spelling mistakes will be corrected ( I'm sorry english is not my first language as you can see), and I promise to improve my animations on my feature works.

Thank you all.

EDIT2: spelling mistakes corrected!

Reviews


MoennetMoennet

Rated 5 / 5 stars

/clap

Oh... Its so sad... TT.TT



TonyBaseTonyBase

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Certainly improving. Much to work on, though.

The amount of dedication that you show to your fans is commendable. I urge you to get a Wacom. It will be worth it. Even I was skeptical, but it's become more and more clear how useful it is.

One of the most challenging parts of a fight movie is clearly showing the action of the characters. This was a movie I expected a fight to be in. Strangely, while there was blood and swords and jumping sequences, I didn't see much combat. You seemed to focus on the story, which started out promisingly good, but ended up melting into an original plot composed of twisted cliches, like kidnapping and brotherly rivalry.

There was just a lot wrong with it, although the quality is much better, with better effects and much more drawn frames. In short, the paper-drawn thing you have going on is slowing you down TREMENDOUSLY, and it prevents you from doing more than music videos that try to tell a plot with an empty promise of action. In the future, I'd like to see you reach beyond the comfort zone of a music video and concentrate on plot and action.

I'd also like to point out that, although spelling is correct, you seem to have problems with context and capitalization. "Don't make a stupid thing" doesn't make as much sense as "Don't do this stupid thing." Adding foul language adds no emotional effect to sentences other than giving it a low-brow label. A line of the text that was supposed to be seen blinked too fast for me to read. It blinked so fast that it's message has been subliminally "written" to my brain, now. Advertisement companies are banned from doing this.


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keepwalking responds:

many thanks for your review, its one of the most usefull Ive ever read. I would like to apologize myself for such an awfull spelling, you see, Im not from America, and english is not my first language, so its really hard to creat deep conversations between charachters. Second, yes, Im thinking of buying a Wacom, I think its a great investment.

My next work will go beyond my regular stuff, I promise, and hope to read your review again by that moment.


darklink1237darklink1237

Rated 5 / 5 stars

koool

it was awsome.but what did he do to the other guys brother?



WaterDustWaterDust

Rated 5 / 5 stars

awesome

i love it, very nice job drawing all of that. i know i could never do that.


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tsharptsharp

Rated 5 / 5 stars

omg

dude how the hell did you do it...and actualy im doing a journal at school and i wanted to try and do your vid.So...is it ok.

P.S. that vid is my favorite two tumbs up!!!