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by: deathkllr84
by: Holstworld
Submitted: 01/15/2009 | 03:34AM EST
File Info: Movie | 1.7 MB | Add Movie to Favorites
Genre: Action
Current Score: 2.16 / 5.00
235 votes | 708 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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First Flash dealio. Hope you guys like. Just experimenting, learning, that kid of thing. Once I get good, This will turn into a series. Possibly?
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Average Score: 5.0 / 10
"Yay"
This flash is awesome, err, was submitted on newgrounds and doesn't afraid of anything? XD
Cool idea though.
this flash is afraid of my dick
"it COULD go somewhere"
not exactly original voice over wasnt great u had some alright drawing which is good, just work on the concept n storyline
"hmm"
well it has potential, but its to early to start talking about a series. in case u really want a series please take another storyline. A black guy that has his friends and family killed and goes out for revenge is not really something new. its been done so many times that it will just damage its potential
But my take on it has not. Pluss, I'm going to revamp once I get used to flash Thanks for the review.
"hmmm"
Why no animation buddy? The most important part of a trailer is that it showcaes some of the best parts of your movie gives them something to look forward to. From what I can tell you probably have a good story, but a still frame does not count as animation, your script was good and your voice was clear, but the narration was terrible, youneed to sound convincing, you are talking about life and death revenge and retribution, but you say it with all the passion as if you were reading a grocery list. I have confidence that your actual animation will probably be good, but it's counter productive to release a trailer that will make people less interested in your movie.
"Keep going"
It isn't bad. But it isn't really good either.
The graphic and music were ok and should you choose make a series they will get better. My problem lies with the story concept. It isn't anything new, so a simple Action series will not be too interesting. One watches it once and then forgets about it. You will need to create interesting twists and choises for the caracter to keep it interesting. But keep going, and even if this series does turn out to be good, it will help you to get better.
I have never planed to do an action series. No good with the serious stuff. Basically, its going to be an action movie the way a Mel Brooks would do it. Thanks for the review.
