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This is an idea I'm trying to turn into a web series. The episodes would get crazier and crazier as they went on.
In a gay way!!
not only to encourage you to keep on with this forthcoming serie. The film is very good, the characters and their facial expressions are very good (you could even work more on it). I agree with Da Foolish 1, you should find a music theme that fits the characters, more than the one you chose...
I'm a fan, I want more !
Needs a better soundtrack
This wuz very good, u need to pursue the web series, the only thing is, im not diggin the music. It sounds like charlie brown or sumthin. U need to make sumthin that more fits the characters. but other than that it wuz very good.
You have something
That was fine work. You have a good feel for the medium, and you have good characters, with a nice cartoony look and timing. And you can draw.
My bit of advice is that you ought find a way to make your drawing more stylized, perhaps starting with the outlines. knowaddimean?
I guess it was okay, i mean if you were seven years old. what the hell was the damn point?! great attempt though. graphics were great, sound was good. needs actual dialogue though, and that tall anyoing guy should be shot, seriously if you make a new episode, kill him.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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