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Jan 13, 2009 | 1:18 PM EST

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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This was ok

~~REVIEW~~
notbad of a film here, it was entertaining the lady at the start should have a voice over instead of the text and button, but other then that it was a pretty funny and amusing flash so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a voice over and some more detail in the backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing flash you have here

~X~



AuzAuz

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, but not that good either

The drawings could´ve been better, but some parts were alright. The newsreader guy looked pretty good for example and the mouths were nicely animated I thought. Also I liked the dustcloud behind that guy when he was barricading the door. Thought that was kinda funny.

It´s good that there was a button added to continue the dialogue. At least I could read it at my own pace and could pause the movie for a while if I wanted to. The sounds were also good, but adding more sounds would be nice I think. Voices would especially be nice, but I don´t know if you have a good microphone/a good voice for that. Otherwise just leave it at text, but do add more other sounds like hammering for example as Haggard already suggested.

Also I can see your english wasn´t always that good :p But that was okay, since it was still followable for as far as I could follow the movie. Haven´t watched the former episodes so some stuff came over a bit weird, but I could see what was going on.

Overall 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Not bad, but not that good either all in all. Practice a bit more on drawing and add some more sounds and I think we could have a pretty good movie here. Good luck with the rest of your series.

~Auz



CoopCoop

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Interesting

I still don't see why this can't be combined with the first episode - it's far too short, to be honest. What I would suggest is that you go looking in the forums for 'Voice Acting', as your flash really would benefit from a sound or two, like the rumble of the tanks passing by, as well as the voices for everyone in the piece.

I think that a little animation of the tank tracks moving as well would be of enormous benefit to you - it will make the thing look much more realistic and give it a feel that you didn't just loop the animation of the tank driving by four times ;)

I'm not quite sure of the plot at this point, but it is getting a little more clear than it was in part 1, so it looks like you're making progress on that front. Perhaps if you tried to zoom in and spend more time with the drawing aspect, you'd be able to give us something that is a very well ronded project and worth those extra points from me.

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good

Again a pretty nice flash. I like how the story continues right where the first part ended. The graphics are better in this one as the background look much more detailed this time.
The animations could still use some work (especially when the guy was walking to the sofa) but I liked the facial expressions of the news reporter.

However, there a still some sound effects missing here. It would be nice to hear some hammering when the guy bars the door shut.

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FroFro

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Much better!

Animation/Graphics - The animation was pretty smooth. I really liked that you added more color in these ones because you lacked in color in the other flashes that I have reviewed so far. I think it looks much better this way.

Story/Content - I liked the story. Your have a good job making an original story line and plot. It's very original all around and some of this was kind of funny.

Audio - I think that you need to add more sound effects and voices to your flash. This would probably make it much better. Especially the part where he was nailing up the door with boards. I think that would have been much better with hammering noises.

Overall - I liked it better than your other flashes. Keep up the good work.

Now the French version of my review.

Animation/Graphiques - L'animation est plutot douce et est bien fluide. J'ai bien aimé que tu ai ajouté plus de couleurs parceque, sur tes autres flashes que j'ai noté, ca manquait vraiment de couleurs. Je pense que ca ressort bien mieux comme ca :).

Histoire/Contenu - J'ai aimé l'histoire. Tu fait du bon travail en inventant tes propres trames et histoires. C'est très original et certaines parties étaient plutôt marrantes.

Audio - I pense que tu devrais ajouter plus d'effets de son et de voix dans des flashes, ceci les améliorerai beaucoup. Spécialement au moment quand le personnage bloque la porte avec des planches, ça aurait été bien d'ajouter des bruits de marteau.

Synthèse - J'ai préféré celui là à tes autres flashes. Continu comme ça!

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Grimasen responds:

Salut et merci pour la critique. A nouveau, je te remercie beaucoup d'en avoir fait une version française.