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Hello, Newgrounds community.
I made this Flash to see just how many different things I can put in it. So there's a load of motion tweens, 2 small simple 3D-animations, and a lot of babbling by me. It's not serious, and not great ( because I'm a novice ).
EDIT: Oops. Wrong icon. Fixed it now.
Flas is made to entertain people, wether it be neat like a music video, fun like a game, scray like a serious flash or intense like an action flash even funny like a comedy one. Making a tweening flash about why blocks are important doesn't count as entertainment. I wouldn't doubt you have the skill to make something good but you are wasting it away on things like this.
Did you miss the 3D-animation? I put loads of time and effort in this. If you can't even give some constructive critism, don't even waste your time commenting.
I think that you laboured the point without being too informative of how things work, which really could have helped the flash - show how pixels work, with their square shape and that how the human eye perceives it all, as you pan further out, assisting the visual process.
This is a good flash, as it has quite a bit of depth, though I would stress that you need to integrate the 3D pieces into it a little better. I think that it has been quite informative about the importance of Blocks to people and I'll make sure that next time I go to the shop, I will ask for blocks.
Also, I live in a tree house, so mine was not built from block shapes :P
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You're right. But what I tried to do was a funny Flash short, not a real documentary.
Thank you for your good review! :)
It's not the OMG BEST ANIMATION PRODUCT EVER
But I LIKED IT
And it helped me to realize that if Blocks could live they would take the world TT_TT!
I was going to make The Importance of Blocks Part 2 as my first flash
Can i do it? Please?
Do you really want do make The Importance of Blocks Part 2? That's fine with me. Do mention me as the conceptist ( the idea is mine, sort of ) if you really plan on doing it.
Very well done for a first time.
it was done pretty well, for a first time.
Keep practicing, and eventually youll be a master at both drawing and animation.
Also, you should consider voice acting =P
kudos, keep trying =)
Thank you very much!
I will certainly keep practising in every way.
I appreciate your review.
I liked the way you did the 3D animation, but yeah, it wasn't particularly interesting.
And why, pray tell, wasn't it interesting? PLEASE, if you MUST insult me, at least state good reasons.
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