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a guy finds a talking rock( but it does not talk in the movie) that starts a fight
ps: had to make it low quality to put it on here but will work on geting good quality for my next vid
don't get it :P
I think you should have made sure the feedback was at a minimum level. Other than that it wasn't too bad.
A random video......Needs different voices for the characters as you can tell its the same person.
Other then that it's just.....boring.
Very nice, but...
I love that puppet clay thing. 2 thoughts however :
1) why do this in flash? There are better media for that
2) the sound quality is below zero. Sounds like you used a 40-year old tape recorder the bad way.
Work on that and add some flash elements to it, and you might get some unique combination that can amaze people.
i did not make it in flash i made it with a stopmotion program named anasazi and put it in to a flash converter so that i could upload it
I didn't like it, but I'll give you some props.
As far as the clay-mation goes, it was very smooth, much better than I could do. From the voice acting (I'm assuming) you're rather young; and, I further applaud the job you did.
For the joke or jokes, I couldn't tell. I'd find someone to write you a script and maybe someone else to voice act for you. Do the animation and devote more time to that so you can produce something well worth giving a 3-5.
I hope to see a much cleaner submission next time.
A short film about a park bench
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