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Jan 13, 2009 | 6:39 AM EST

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Author Comments

Aaaaaaah, this is my forth work on flash and to be honest I am proud of it!
Just take a look on the work I have done the last 3 days, then you will know what I mean.

This time the grafics are realy basic compared to "Arthur is cool". But I tried to improve the Movements of my Characters (have a look on "stickrun", then you know)
So what is best for frame per frame? Right Stickmen!

I hope you like it :)

Reviews


Maverick32183Maverick32183

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 28, 2009

Meh....

There wasn't anything I haven't seen a thousand times before on this site. Some stick figure fighting to some techno song. I understand your new to flash so i won't attack our animation skills but I can say that your creativity in this is very low. There were no voices to give your character exactly that a voice. There was no solid story progression i could see. i had no idea what was happening at any given moment, except a guy running at some evil face and then there's a sword and some giant hand straight out of the legend of zelda. Why did the stick guy want to fight him? Why did the evil guy hate the stick guy? Why did big hands attack him? You see what i mean as a viewer of a story we don't understand what your thinking when it comes to your flash. We can't read your mind so you need to be able to convey your idea through words to let us know what it is we are supposed to be watching. Even if you don't have equipment to record voices you could at the very least in your description and user comments give us an idea of the plot and what we are watching. I had no emotional involvement at all with your character so i could care less if he lives or dies. Which when creating a short you need. You want people to care about your character and what happens to him. Please view this advise as constructive criticism and not as just a retaliation for your review of my music. i always like to review something that the user who reviewed my work has done. So in no way would my opinion of your work have changed even if i had been given a 10 by you, I tell it like i see it.



viskapowerviskapower

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars January 14, 2009

was not bad

are u a first timer ?


BlackFear responds:

Just read the Author comments ;)

I do flash now for 3 days, was my 4th project.
The other where horrible ^^ chekc my acc page, you will know what i mean :p