Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jan 13, 2009 | 2:31 AM EST

Related Stuff

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

The story of a lonely, sad stable horse, who's only dream is to one day be a free, wild stallion.

A mixture of musical and slapstick comedy, hopefully will deliver a good laugh.

I created this short animation as a school assignment in IT class and turned out to be quite a good piece of work. I'm proud of it and would love to hear what others think of it.

More reviews, the better!
Cheers.

Reviews


gamenerd08gamenerd08

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 13, 2009

Funny

Keep 'em comin' man. Awesome!



DeweyGlandDeweyGland

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 13, 2009

That was the best I've seen all day.

That was cool! The work on the legs running was smooth, and your artwork was tight. Your story, while short, was straightforward and simple (both qualities I like).

Your soundwork could use a little tweaking. Some of the levels were a bit off, and maybe didn't synch perfectly with the cuts. I'd also suggest faster transitions between perspectives and scenes: a quick suggestion of pan and zoom works just as well and doesn't interfere with the flow of the movie, and pacing is especially critical in comedy. Tighten that up, lop off a second of unnecessary stuff here and there, and you've got it.

All in all I think you've made quite an admirable bit of work! If you make more, let me know.


Rhino-Rampage responds:

Checkout my previous work "Morning Bus Mayhem" and let me know what you think.

It has a walkcycle of a person in it, although it isn't as smooth as the horse.

Cheers on the rating!


AfrodaleAfrodale

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 13, 2009

well

the graphics man was, good the story the same make a part two i wanna see where the horse runs to



El-SydEl-Syd

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 13, 2009

Nice

Very cute flash and GREAT use if music clips, the backrounds seemed a bit generic though and the horses/rustler could've benefitted from some shading. nice story though and fun to watch.