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sprites were from panel monkey, this took me a day and a bit to do.
also please pardon the lack of a preloader, the NG one dosent seem to work with CS3 so i guess
im just going to have to be very annoying :P sorry.
Pretty good for a 1st flash
Just maybe add a background and some sound (and some sort of plot) and it would be good for at least a 3.4 score. Sure right now its kinda boring without any sound but you put the effort in the flash and with new suggestions could give some awards later when you get experience in this stuff. Just because I'm nice and in a happy mood im giving you a 5 :)
first of thanks for the 5, much appreciated!
yeah i mean this just started of as me learning how to animate and using ryu walking as practise.
it just kind of grew from there lol, but thanks alot for ur time and ur positive input!.
Bad: No preloader (at least you apologized, lol) no audio, no background, mediocre animation, no original animation (that I could tell)
Good: At parts it was actually ok, but with a white background it's hard to tell where the camera is and where the people off the screen are. It's ok, I guess.
im working on the 'bad' as i type, thanks for your review!
Notbad at all.....
It's a good job nothing to blame!
The only little reproach is the absence of sound.
a good start
but some a background and some sound and of course some music could of made way better
thanks for the constructive criticism,
all has been taking on board.
thanks for viewing.
Pretty decent for a first flash, i did like the use of the camera angles with dramatic zoom capabilities :D
hey, somebody noticed ;)
thanks for reviewing
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