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Will Agent 003 kill Don? You will need to wait and see. Your ratings count. Thank you.
Thank you for making this pass the blam stage.
Part 3 Coming soon!
Take our advice kid, this is NOT what people want to see getting through the portal.
The portal system is based on views as well as votes, the more people that watch the better chance it has of passing, thats why alot of spam and terrible submissions get through.
So the only reason your "Toons" are getting through is due to the fact it has Madness in its name, sooner or later people are going to notice these with th more you make and will begin ignoring them, thus getting them blammed straight away.
So just stop making them.
They are stupid, boring, the most NON madness toons ever and are incredibly time wasting to watch.
Like in my other reviw on part 1
Don't make 25 parts, this is probably the most crappest thing ive seen, the sound doesnt flow, lack of sprites and walk cycles. And your making 25 parts of this crap.
Don't make another 25 parts, make them all into one simple animation. Meh.
The only reason I gave 2 was the effort. but this looks like a 5min job.
Really improve. Man, A simple pivot animation is better than this.
Needs a lot of work.
Animation/Graphics - Things weren't done very well here at all. The pictures, as it seems you have used pictures and not sprites, are of bad quality. Next time make sprites or just simple find a sprite sheet of madness somewhere online. I think that the picture was kind of too zoomed out during the regular fight too. I do like how you zoomed in during a part of the fight, but the quality of the picture was twice as bad when you did zoom in. The animation itself was smooth now and then, but for the most part it really needed to be worked on. Kind of choppy and not very smooth at all.
Story/Content - Why make this? It's exactly like 1,000 other submissions on this site. I understand if you are just practicing, but there isn't any reason to submit this unless you want to see how much you have improved since you have started making flash or something like that. That being said the submission was too short. This is a two part submission and even if you put the two parts together it is still way to short. Perhaps you should put together about 10 episodes or maybe even more before submitting them. And their really isn't any story at all. Perhaps actually adding one instead of the generic Madness fight would set your flash apart from the other thousands of Madness submissions on this site.
Audio - The audio wasn't timed well at all. It could have used better timing and probably the music too. A nice Madness theme song in the background wouldn't hurt or anything. Naturally with a longer flash you would need more audio and more music so in the future this section of your flash could be a little bit better, but only if you sync it much better.
Overall - The animation/graphics are pretty bad and need work on, their needs to be something that sets it apart from the other thousands of Madness movies, and the audio needs to be worked on to make it better.
Good luck on any upcoming flash submissions.
It's almost off.
I hope. Next time use sprites. This was insanely horrible in almost every way. DO NOT make more until you are at least SUB PAR
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make more plz! and make it longer
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