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This is my first original flash series. I hope everyone likes it. I tried :D
it was nice and nicely animated... i say you should have made it longer though...
yeah i realized that now, i'll be trying to make the following episodes longer :D. thanks for the comments.
Is it really your first flash?
If it is, then all the thumbs i posses up, very well done.
The story telling part is a little bit strange though, like the ship being ok after such a crash.
And two details, that actually don´t matter, but since you put so much effort designing the ship, I thought you might wanna know:
when he floats trough space with no fuel, you can see a white vertical line in the background and the other thing is, when you zoom in on the dash you notice that the gears of the ship aren´t as detailed as the rest of the things.
But I really liked it, n can´t wait to see what happens next. KEEP N COMIN
well thanks for the helpful comments, yeah i keep trying to get rid of that LINE lol but i can't seem to get it to work. also, it's not my first FLASH, it's my first flash SERIES. i've done a couple flashes so far. :D
COol art and animation there, the spaceship part was abit long, but the problem is, some parts dont make sense, like for example, in space there's no friction so the ship would keep it's speed till the "Imminent Impact", lol what a way for the ship to break the news XD.
And the landing, it's a crash landing with a huge explosion, i expected the dude to be climbing out of the wreckage but everything was intact, so...WHAT exploded??
i think it shoulda been some sort of huge puff of dust like Wile E. Coyote does with his landings.
and for such a short teaser-like-episode, there'd better be sth huge waiting for us in Ep2 ;)
well I'm glad you (mostly) liked it haha. I just fixed the beginning with the ship :)
It was kool, but... short,and i cant stream so it glitched plz add a pre loader :D
cant wait for the next one, Great Job!
Nice little short
Good work. Nice animation, style, and sound. Extremely short, but got me curious. Put some more out there. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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