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This is my first flash made with my new tablet, I am still getting used to, anyway i though this up a little while ago and thought it might be funny so here it is!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoy, Evilchild Animations
Hey!...not bad at all.
Hey, first flash?....Not too shabby dude. Lot better than my first flash. So I'm gonna pretend I'm not a noob and critique you on what I DID see wrong with it..xDD
You definatly did some nice lip sync, and your sounds were all in the right place. You have the great start to a funny line of episodes. I would pay a little more attention to the detail on the backrounds, and to things like the shed and stuff. Also check to make sure that you don't have any "blank" spaces where there shouldn't be. (in other words make sure things are colored in completly.)
But definatly a good roll. I look forward to seeing more from you.
That was simple but pretty good, Your drawing style is cool, the animation could use a bit more work but all in all this was fun to watch.
The animation is okay. The problem is the voice acting. The dad doesn't sound like he's over 12 years old. That idea was also okay.
Keep making more, just fix the voices and it'll be good.
A little lame
O'h SHIT a lot lame
Nice one, I thought it was rather amusing.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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