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Jan 7, 2009 | 1:42 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is just a little experiment with Lines when i was just messing around then i made a little story to it.
Hope you like it, remember this is experimental.
Thanks please rate and review.
If you like it let me know and i will make it into a proper thing with sequels, As i really like the idea myself. Obviously it would look better as a full thing.
Thanks again.

*SORRY FOR THE REALLY BAD ENDING BUT THEN AGAIN ITS AN EXPERIMENT*

Reviews


nuklhexnuklhex

Rated 2 / 5 stars

ummm diddnt get it

i did not get this at all but was good



UnknownReviewerUnknownReviewer

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Ummm

The concept is pretty cool but the exploitation of the concept can be better . Hope yours sequels will be better . But the ending is very bad , espicially the ``The End`` without the word end . I never seen that before 0.o . OH !!! Sorry for that :( .



OllieflasherOllieflasher

Rated 5 / 5 stars

THIS IS GENERAL

I dunno why it just says the at the end sorry about that.
It should say end but it must have got screwed up in the uploading process
Oh and by the way this is biohazards on his Music Account.
Thanks



Nathan-h99-1Nathan-h99-1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

was okay

liked the music, but that totally wasnt a ball lol, but i think more lines jumping in and out making crazy shapes or designs would be sweet, im personally looking forward to seeing more :)


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KyleStyleKyleStyle

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

waht-wat-what?

not sure i got the whole conceipt; hows the title relate to the flash?
the ending? loved the curtain coming down (CLASSIC) but then, just "The" without end after it! AAAAAAHHHHhh drive me crazy ! the WHAT? just the? >.<