Score: 0
"Sigh."
date: January 15, 2009
...what?
- GOOD -
- You improved. Yay.
- FBF, That's a good start.
- BAD-
- This concept is unbelievable unoriginal.
- How long did this take, like, 5 minutes?
- Same song. Again.
- It was too random.
"Yes, this really DOES deserve a zero. Look at it as a viewer who just sees the animation. Does it pull you in? Does it entertain you for long amounts of time? Do you enjoy it?
If you answered no to ANY of these, you need to work harder. Try plots and a storyline."
No. No. No. You seriously need to work harder on something that is more than a FBF with lines squiggling around the screen.
Seriously.
ALSO, Try to respond with more than 15 words, and not just 3.
January 16, 2009
Author's Response:
Why not three?