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rated 2.08 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
story
comic
maple

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jan 3, 2009 | 4:11 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is my first flash movie..
It's just a comic.

Please watch and tell me if the layout should be changed, and your thoughts.
Also the end is kinda like an inside joke.
(Next comic will have music in the background, PM me if you have a song on newgrounds you would like me to use.)

Reviews


range4liferange4life

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great Strip, man

i loved it and i think it deserves more than the rating score it has, it could use bg music though



PlasticFisherMenPlasticFisherMen

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice!

Nice comic strip man, make more!


LunArFoX00 responds:

I'll see what I can do, And the next one will be much better, don't worry.
I'm just happy this wasn't blammed..


LarsflashLarsflash

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

nice

very good :)
but maybe animating would be more exiting?


LunArFoX00 responds:

Yeash, I'm going to try that out, Kinda still working on it, Thanks.


MycroShaftMycroShaft

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Not that good

The images beween frames are unstable and keep moving around. If you ask me the plot wasn't that well written. Write a better story and ry to keep the frames stable.


LunArFoX00 responds:

This was basicly an experiment, Just released to the public.
Don't worry, The actual story will be soon... (LegacyReborn)


TheRealSargeTheRealSarge

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good Job

Needs Sum Work But It Was Realy Funny
You Could Add Voices And Mabee Get Rid Of The Buttton....Have It Go On Its Own
But Gj


LunArFoX00 responds:

Not so sure about the voices but thanks, The thoughts help alot.

The next one will be alot better!