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Hey guys ^_^
So this is just a quick short I animated based off one of my comics, which are hosted on altf4.smackjeeves.com, the site I co-host with a friend of mine.
Took about 2 days of on-and-off work. I haven't used flash to animate in a LONG time, so it was good to get back into it a little bit.
Do enjoy! I quite like feedback so I encourage you to review, I'll respond to every one that I get =).
All sound effects and voice done by me.
Very nice for your first ^^.
The animation and sounds were great. The joke, however, was pretty weak and like the review before me, the only the thing that saved you was the drums roll at the end. Nice try. With the flash skills you displayed, you have a lot of potential. Keep working at it ^_^
Heh, agreed that the joke was lame, I'll get some better stuff written for the future for sure =P
The animation style was very well done, the voicing and sound effects were also crystal clear and didnt make me cringe as in some animations.
As for the joke, well I think the drum roll saved you to be honest, still made me laugh :)
Keep up the good work I look forward to seeing what you bring out next.
Thanks =) glad you liked it.
Not bad, man.
Pretty funny, good brisk pace. Animation is simple, but not distractingly so. The voice audio was a little low, but not everyone has high-end mics, so you do what you can.
Keep it up- I can see you becoming really good.
Heh, I have a high-end mic, I'll work on amplifying to proper volume for future.
Cheers for the review ^_^
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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