Score: 6
"By George..."
date: January 3, 2009
I agree, the animation is quite good, and the voices are interesting. The last guy is right, though, the acting leaves something to be desired. The voices are pretty flat throughout, for all the characters. That might be a function of the mike, but I think it's because you tried to do the whole thing as deadpan humor. That's ok, but the characters still have to get into what's going on in their lives, otherwise they just seem blah. Also, you could work a bit on your comic timing. For example, it probably would have been funnier if redbeard had caught some other part of his body unintentionally on fire, or if the other dude had raised the whole roasting marshmallows thing a little earlier.
January 3, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice. I'll screw around with timing more and see if it really is the mic or the voice acting.
