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Black Father's Evolution

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black father and his evil twin team up, allowing their swords to touch each other to evolve into the beast known as the Black Father Demon


this animation also features the older versions and some other original works done back in 2005

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too bad

In fact, you can use some cool effects, like the white fading and stuff. But the problem is animations and drawings are still lame. I would like voice too, while i'm waiting for you to make a storyline.

4 years old

would you have done it the same way if you had to create it again today?

there was definitely room for improvement. your screen effects weren't very effective, and the drawing could definitely be touched up. coloring could be more representative. subtitles were a bit pathetic--use your voice. flash is a multimedia...use it.

the audience's sudden immersion in this plot was a bit confusing.

author's comments cannot excuse this. if you thought it was lacking in some respects, why even submit it all? why not be proud of your work? to me, the real question would have been, do i need to re-do this to represent my skills, ideas, etc, of today? a noob could create this today, and ok, fine, but im sure you've moved up in abilities.

also, i could care less about your statistics about frames and objects at the end. what, do you want a cookie because how hard you worked? or how hard you think you worked?

do you know what "swords touching" refers to in the US btw?

black-father responds:

i'd prefer subtitles than my voice since it fits my movies more. in my previous movies (one of them submitted in NG), i used my voiceacting.. everybody said to me not to use my voice coz it was horrible!!

second paragraph: i just like to show everything i did... not just the best thing.. some of my friends prefer my old animations more than the new ones..

i want a cookie because i worked hard!!! happy now or not??

about the "swords touching" i don't know what it is refered to in US??

WTF....

Yeah, just...WTF...

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Jan 3, 2009
8:10 AM EST