Not too bad exactly...

This was alright but like the last guy said make it a preloader for something related to this because it would be pretty creative if his body like forms into VA7DAS or he just slowly makes it or something. This is very original though :P. Nice job I encourage you to put this as a preloader entertainment or just a way to show your name! Or you could just make a really long flash movie of this stick like forming into trucks and shit which would be pretty enjoyable. I think you did something real good with something so simple and that's why I think it's original.

great idea

just use that as a preloader or something for your next flash.

less than ok

it was ok for such a small flash but it wasnt great. its more like a preloader.

Heh. Not good. But he stabbed himself

I thought that was an intro to something much better. Seems i was wrong. I laughed when he stabbed himself in the head tho. If this is ur first flash, practice and you should get better. Then u can make multiple ppl stabbing themselves in the head, THEN MORE AND MORE PPL STABBING THEMSELVES IN THE HEAD!!! Maybe some catchy music next time.

congrats.

you made moving lines that form a drawing.