Score: 7
"Better..."
date: January 1, 2009
You came real close to an actual plot there for a second, but not quite. Maybe next time.
Graphics: Nice art, good Japanese style, Selena looks out-of-proportion to me.
Sound: You play a nice guitar. A bit faster on the chord switching is key, however. Voice acting is phenomenal, except for Selena- It's not that the actress can't sing, it's that the quality of the recording itself ain't too good.
Writing: Funny stuff. I've read some of the scripts you've written, and I can't wait until you actually start the plot.
Animation: Fluid and nice. FBF is OK, but the tweening is excellent. Where you fall short is the lip-syncing. Lip syncing needs woik.
Humor: OK, The Rabbi was hilarious. The ad itself is a good parody.
Note to gentiles: The Hebrew text on the bag says something to the nature of "I am NOT friends with Alien Boy."
Etc: Easter eggs were poorly done. Very poor. But funny all the same. I understand Joe is there simply because you want to keep that joke going. That's all fine with me.
Later, man.
January 2, 2009
Author's Response:
The easter eggs were done at about 11:30 on New Years Eve, when I still thought I might be able to finish by midnight.
