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Dec 31, 2008 | 12:41 PM EST
  • Daily Feature January 1, 2009

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2nd episode of the series Rat. I've put so much into this animation, from writing the music, to designing and painting the backgrounds and of course the animation too. I thought I'd never see the day I finally uploaded this to NG.

I really hope you enjoy it!

Edit: Awsome Daily First! Thanks very much for the reviews and votes every one c:

Reviews


Mystery-Moon-PieMystery-Moon-Pie

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 1, 2009

Excellent work on animating this.

Very good work.



TetrisClockTetrisClock

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2009

Pretty clever

I must say, I was skeptical after the first one, but after watching this and comparing the two, I think this is going to be quite series. It's obviously one of the more original works I've seen lately.

My only concern is that you're going to concentrate more on dialogue and less on character movements, expressions, and other sounds to tell a story. There's a surprising amount of story one can make just with pantomime and sound effects, and I really hate to see this series turn into a talking-heads, plot summary project. I really think you had something going in the first episode with no dialogue and no descriptions; only jagged editing and sounds.

If however, dialogue is absolutely necessary for the the plot to take hold, keep it to a minimum as you've done so far.


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TottyTotty

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 1, 2009

Wow.

Pretty darn baller. I enjoyed the background work very much. I would try some different techniques for effects, they tend to look a little brackenwoody, not at all a bad thing though.

Nice work, adding you to me favorites!



loman1016loman1016

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2009

Dark and innovative

seen you on deviant art before, gotta admit I like your style. keep it up. looking forward to more of the series.



dimmadomedimmadome

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 1, 2009

analysis #3

man,you made an excelent animation in all aspects!Are you a pro?