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Submitted: 12/31/2008 | 01:41AM EST

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Genre: Experimental

Current Score: 2.98 / 5.00

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Here's My first Flash.. Spend 5 hours Frame by Framing it..793 Frames. Any comments on improvements very welcome. Hope you enjoy it as much as i did making it :)
The Song is Put Me Down By The Cranberries. Thanks Newgrounds for being Cool.

Edit: Wow Suprised it didn't get Blammed :) Thanks for the Reviews!
Added Replay Button that WORKS :D
Added Preloader.

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Average Score: 7.5 / 10

Score: 8
Aci6

"{{Sweet and simple}}"

by: Aci6
date: December 31, 2008

Highly simple and original (Though the idea of ambiotic FBF is nothing new) this is quite enjoyable to watch. It's smooth and the music goes well with the pink background and blue and yellow lines which free flow around on the screen questioning love with some clever animation.
Highly enjoyable, it would be nice to see it expanded upon.

~A~

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :) I'll try harder next time

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Score: 10
ajmm610

"Original"

date: December 31, 2008

You are sick for making this, a fucking sick human who doesnt deserve life!!! nah im kiddin, yur alright

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks? ..I think :S

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Score: 7
Diederick

"Wow."

date: December 31, 2008

It's like Free Association Writing, but then in the form of Flash art. Not the best, but I really liked it, certainly 100 points for best started effort. The most important thing is there (the actual art), the rest will come as you go.

We need people like you around here.

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

And we all need fair reviews and more people like you!! :3

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Score: 7
Lockdude

"One of the best first flashes I've seen."

date: December 31, 2008

I am seeing on newgrounds an influx of these types of no plotline or even storyline flashes. Or maybe I just haven't noticed them until now. However, don't get me wrong, I quite like them, and I thought this was a really good first flash. As I said in my summary, I think it is one of, if not the best first flashes I've seen. It's not too fancy but you can tell effort has been put into it, and it runs smoothly, and comes together quite well. I look forward to see future flashes from you. Great job.

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

Tried to give it some kind of plot, but i suppose understanding what is going on when it's a bunch of lines is kinda hard :D & it was a Lets do my first flash at 3:40 in the morning Idea :) Random thoughts spawn random acts :) Thanks for the Review

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Score: 9
InnerChild548

"How to make a replay button."

date: December 31, 2008

How to make a reply button:

On the last frame draw your button, select it, and click F8. Choose "Button", then press OK. Select said button, press F9 and put in this code:

On (press){
gotoandplay(1);
}

Also, click on the last Frame and press F9, put in this code:

Stop();

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks buddy :)

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