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This is my first flash ever and I need advice still the song is viva la vida if it showed up
zomfg no sounds!
but i lawled! lawlolawlolawlolawlolawl! and i did it all over your carpet too!
Make some sound next time and it could be a lot more popular!11 :D
It's actually very very nice, it must have taken a very long time to be made, but I can see your animation's flow is smooth, and very neat. You still have to get used to SFX and camera movement, and include some "eye candy", but overall you've done an awesome job, and I'm sure you'll come up with great stuff. If you need any help with animating (because I don't know shit about Action Scripting). Feel free to go to my userpage and mail me your questions.
This is great for your first animation!
Your gonna be great! Try some more detailed drawing.
It was okay.
The graphics were very poor, and there needs to be sound. A song and some sound effects would be nice. And my friend, there is more to animation than shape tweening.
Um, Kyothine, this is my first ever flash. You could learn from these other guys, it's a little thing called moral support.
A short film about a park bench
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