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I decided I would submit at least one thing to NG before the year was up and so I set to work on this flash animation, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is encouraged ,enjoy
Really liked the music!
Though random it is, I rather wacth this than some of the things iv'e seen in newgrounds :P like the colorfull circles to ^-^
all i can say is, I really would like it if you continue'd this.
Meaning like the flash you did now as an intro to something bigger.
>3< but then again thats just some thoughts :P
Random is good
Dark likes Random
I AM THE LIZARD KING
I will say that you have the art part of this down, but the music was so horrible that it brings this right down to a zero. I can't say much to help you improve on this other then to not post this simply because the year is about to end and you want something in, develop a longer animation, cut the crappy music, and possibly tweak the character's lip synching a bit.
Oh, and it was a nice touch to use the tweening option to make the eight circles switch colors, it's a simple and trippy effect that can save things from being immediately blamed, which it might just barely do here.
Thanks for the honesty in your review, I'll most likely submit something better next time
not the best
it wasn't the best idea ever. but i like the little dudes with the arms danceing. that was funny.
yeah those little grey guys were pretty fun to draw and animate
Very good :D
You did a great job with the colors, I also liked how the faces became eyes....very strange, but good. The only problem I had would be that your singer didn't exactly move his lips...he just had a mouth moving up and down, it's not terrible, but you need to give your mouth more character. A mouth should be a character of its own, so that the person watching can read the lips of the person. Very good job though. Keep up the great work :)
thanks for the nice critique, yeah everything needs work but I appreciate the tiem you took to give me some pointers ;D
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