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This is my first flash movie with drawn graphics!
Ok, its not very good flash movie and graphics are bad but ive tried to do my best. I dont want to make some crap like many do.
So please dont be very rought with your reviews.
UPDATE!!! there was bug with camera, well its really great that i fix it
good for the first
I kinda liked it, it doesn't really have bad graphics(like alot of ng stuff). My first flash, was really unspeakable, so this is pretty good compared to me.
Who did the music?
look left and up, there is main theme
Great flash man keep it up.
lolol -- Not bad :P
Good skills for a first flash lmao
I reckon u arnt that bad at animating - the first part was GREAT but you resorted to sticks which was confusing.. they switched body forms in the first 20 secs with no explanation (thats a nono).
The animation was great, but it didnt seem whether you were going anywhere with a plot. Maybe some more info about the story in the authors comments. ^.^
Were you trying to get the message across that the last character was invulnerable/invincible? And the epic battle would be continued in a sequel? Im confident you wont do the sequel :P
Making a sequel (or saying to be continued) usually gives the impression to veiwers that you are mighty lazy to not finish the job. (Thats also a no-no :P) Or, well TRY not to use -to be continued- unless the flash was visually 'STUNNING' and i hate to say yours was far from that 'STUNNING' look. I guess that you did mighty well for your first flash so good luck in the future. I'm gonna keep an eye on you for that sequel :P
I hope this reveiw helped.
well, when i will have more skills i will make it more understandable
switching is the main idea
Great First Try
You seem to have it down...everything is good, just work on the art as you said. However, I can't draw etheir and can't blame you much if you have trouble doing that. Anyhow...great job...and it wasn't crap. You already know where you can do better and I have no doubt that your next submission will, in fact, be better. Have a great day. :)
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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