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i have remade my first flash and made it better, but if u still think it sucks PLZ PM me and tell me wat i can do to make it better.
Length: 70.5 sec (1' 10")
im still learning the basics so dont expect a great flash.
watch my latest version.
Funny, but the flash need more work.
ill need more experience first!
Could use more work
It's basically the same thing as last time with minor improvements. I thought it was a loop at first, but it isn't.
How about instead of the newgrounds tank coming down from the top left corner to the bottom right corner, you have the tank go from left to right horizontally so you can detail the dog being crushed by the tank. And maybe you could make it an actual loop and add a background and some sound effects.
check out my new one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /476206
i think you should improve the frame rate. and maybe have the dog move a lil
oh my gawd
u could do better.... i mean it still needs alot of work to be done to it!!!
much better than last time, but still needs some work. i see you cut out all of the tank, and also the dog is now cutout. the thing that still needs work is that the blood still appears randomly. right when the tank completely covers the dog is when you should put the blood thing in. that way nobody can see the blood appear randomly.
much better, tho. remember, your first few flashes are gonna present you with lots of hardship and troubles as far as quality and voting, so just keep at it. eventually it will be awesome.
here is one more thing you can do, try to draw up a background for the tank to drive on like a street or just a road or something. maybe with buildings or something. just an idea.
ill try better next time, but still im just learning.
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