Score: 6

"Oh dear god"

by: psychicpebble

date: December 26, 2008

I'm usually nicer about reviews, because I want to help people out, but I really can't say much to help. It would be okay if you were a mediocre artist, but come on.

You should have stuck with stick figures, the storyline was fine, but I'm not sure I liked the movie overall.

To much was was missing from this, good artwork, good music, good animation, try to work on one of those before actually making a flash. I created so many animations and didn't submit them. So, practice.

Also, fix the button. You made he sound clip an event, make it a stream, that should make things much easier on you.

Score: 0

""To be continued""

by: daniel-mcl

date: December 26, 2008

Not if I can do anything about it...

Score: 0

"Not good."

by: ImDero

date: December 26, 2008

The timing was as bad as the grammar was as bad as the animation. Needs a lot of work.

Score: 6

"not only the pause was wrong"

by: bjorndabeast

date: December 26, 2008

if i wanted to see the next text, it did not worked. also the animation was not that good. the music was good but you can fix the rewind and forward buttons, it wil make it some better. hopefully episode 2 will be better.

Score: 7

"Not bad.."

by: SilverSpartan

date: December 26, 2008

Im looking forward to the next episode