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This is my first Flash animation, so don`t expect too much ^^.
Considering this is your first...
I gotta say it's an excellent flash. Smooth, with simple animation. Thats what alot of people like. Also try to flesh out the characters, if possible. You could have a real hit on your hands if it was Longer, Some Kind of Plot, and of course make it random put not just plain out of whack. But of course your experience will grow and hopefully you'll find more constructive ideas in your think tank. Excellent start!
It's pretty good for a first animation, I like it.
You inspire me, sir. That was pretty good for a first. Stylish, enjoyable, good timing.
why r u posting stuff on christmas day?!!?!!!
lol...i dont count, im only on the internet to find a game shop that is open
First flash? Not bad for a beginner.
Yes, it was a bit rough, but as your experience grows, so will your quality. For this particular flash though, I kept noticing the rock that would appear in front of the rear tire of the truck, and it's a bit jarring. Either make the animation smoother, or move such items to where they wouldn't be noticed as harshly.
Nice start though!
Wow thank you for that constructive critic ;) .
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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